Wedding song

6 thoughts on “Wedding song

  1. I’m not into poetry, as all will attest, I just can’t/don’t understand it, but I do like this, I think it’s rather nice 😀

  2. And so is your comment, thank you!

  3. Aunt Beulah says:

    I ike this poem so much: its structure, rhythm, gentle rhymes and theme. I’ve copied it and hope to read it at the wedding or reception of a loved one. I read it aloud, and like all good poems, it sounded even better than it read.

    1. I am so happy that you like it enough to read at another wedding. I wave it on its way. Thank you, Janet.

  4. Val says:

    This is beautiful, Rachel. And it has a lovely rhythm, too.

    1. Thank you Val. I wrote it as a song but it works as a poem too, I think.